Well this is embarrassing. I sort of forgot one line of my song and when I was singing to myself, I realized that I goofed that line. So I'm going to correct myself again. Anyway, the music is pretty cool and I think it's fun to play. I'd really like others to just appreciate it. I don't care about the money or fame that comes out of it; I just want others to feel inspired from the song I wrote.
On line 7, I meant to write at the end, "I'd like to see you live your life and get through all your days." Yeah, after singing it to myself, it feels like it's flowing better, so that's what I actually meant.